Students and Phones

Key Idea

Are Students addicted to their cellphones? If so, is that a problem?

What must you achieve?

In this paragraph I am trying to show/prove/explain that. 

Introduction

Key Information you want to include

1. Data on how we studied the students

2. Why they are addicted to their phones

3. Why some aren't addicted

Delivery

Best paragraph to structure to convey all this information

Some students are addicted to their phones, the students aren't addicted have other things to do.

According to King University, the average person touches their phone 2,167 times everyday, and that iPhone users unlock their phones upward of 70 times a day, whereas Samsung and Huawei users unlock their phone upwards of 110 times. CNN says that 50% of students admit to suffering from a cellphone addiction, and that 59% of parents believe their children are addicted to their cellphone. We surveyed our class to see if they were addicted to mobile phones, the survey conducted on Thursday, 6th of August showed that 29% of 10Wd considers themselves addicted to their cellphone, and 42% of students in 10Wd use their cellphone for over 4 hours a day. The reason they are addicted is because they need social media to keep up with everything and communicate with friends, they also play mobile games. The non addicted have said they have other things like sport and or chores. These reasons and examples summarise the use and addiction of students.

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